Planning pitch/Response to feedback

Response to feedback:
In the feedback we received, the revisions we are going to make to our initial ideas is by ensuring we have enough time to plan as we have a lot of locations to film in for the video, there are also issues in the props on where we would buy the sparklers and to be able to book the studio to film the band scenes in. Risk assessments were also taken into consideration as there could be health and safety issues, in terms of handling the sparklers and filming on location etc.